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            <strong>Dr. Eleanor Gaye</strong><br>

            Awesome Science faculty<br>

            University of Awesome<br>

            Bobtown, CA 99999,<br>

            USA<br>

            <strong>Tel:</strong> 123-456-7890<br>

            <strong>Email:</strong> no_reply@example.com

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    <time class="sender-column" datetime="2016-01-20">20 January 2016</time>

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    <p>

        <strong>Miss Eileen Dover</strong><br>

        4321 Cliff Top Edge<br>

        Dover, CT9 XXX<br>

        UK

    </p>

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<h1>Re: Eileen Dover university application</h1>

<p>Dear Eileen,</p>

<p>Thank you for your recent application to join us at the University of Awesome's science faculty to study as

    part

    of your <abbr title="Doctor of Philosophy">PhD</abbr> next year. I will answer your questions one by one, in

    the

    following sections.

</p>

<h2>Starting dates</h2>

<p>We are happy to accommodate you starting your study with us at any time, however it would suit us better if

    you

    could start at the beginning of a semester; the start dates for each one are as follows:

</p>

<ul>

    <li>First semester: <time datetime="2016-09-09">9 September 2016</li>

    <li>Second semester: <time datetime="2017-01-15"></time>15 January 2017</li>

    <li>Third semester: <time datetime="2017-05-02"></time>2 May 2017</li>

</ul>

<p>Please let me know if this is ok, and if so which start date you would prefer.</p>

<p>You can find more information about <a href="https://www.ox.ac.uk/">important university dates</a> on our

    website.

</p>

<h2>Subjects of study</h2>

<P>

    At the Awesome Science Faculty, we have a pretty open-minded research facility — as long as the subjects

    fall

    somewhere in the realm of science and technology. You seem like an intelligent, dedicated researcher, and

    just

    the kind of person we'd like to have on our team. Saying that, of the ideas you submitted we were most

    intrigued

    by are as follows, in order of priority:

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    <li>Turning H<sub>2</sub>O into wine, and the health benefits of Resveratrol

        (C<sub>14</sub>H<sub>12</sub>O<sub>3</sub>.)</li>

    <li> Measuring the effect on performance of funk bassplayers at temperatures exceeding 30°C (86°F), when the

        audience size exponentially increases (effect of 3 × 10<sup>3</sup> increasing to 3 × 10<sup>4</sup>.)

    </li>

    <li><abbr title="HyperText Markup Language">HTML</abbr> and <abbr

            title="Cascading Style Sheets">CSS</abbr>constructs for representing musical scores.</li>

</ol>

<p>So please can you provide more information on each of these subjects, including how long you'd expect the

    research to take, required staff and other resources, and anything else you think we'd need to know? Thanks.

</p>

<h2>Exotic dance moves</h2>

<p>Yes, you are right! As part of my post-doctorate work, I did study exotic tribal dances. To answer your

    question,

    my favourite dances are as follows, with definitions.

</p>

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    <dt>Polynesian chicken dance</dt>

    <dd>A little known but very influential dance dating back as far as 300<abbr title="Before Christ">BC</abbr>, a

        whole village would dance around in a circle like chickens, to encourage their livestock to be

        "fruitful".

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    <dt>Icelandic brownian shuffle</dt>

    <dd>Before the Icelanders developed fire as a means of getting warm, they used to practice this dance, which

        involved huddling close together in a circle on the floor, and shuffling their bodies around in

        imperceptibly tiny,

        very rapid movements. One of my fellow students used to say that he thought this dance inspired modern

        styles

        such as Twerking.</dd>

    <dt>Arctic robot dance</dt>

    <dd>An interesting example of historic misinformation, English explorers in the 1960s believed to have

        discovered a new dance style characterized by "robotic", stilted movements, being practiced by

        inhabitants

        of Northern Alaska

        and Canada. Later on however it was discovered that they were just moving like this because they were

        really

        cold.</dd>

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<p>For more of my research, see my <a href="https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s12119-010-9084-8">exotic

        dance research page</a>.</p>

<p>Yours sincerely,</p>

<p>Dr Eleanor Gaye</p>

<p>University of Awesome motto: "Be awesome to each other." -- <cite>The memoirs of Bill S Preston, <abbr

            title="Preston">Esq</abbr></cite></p>

Hi @117921913 and welcome to the community :wave:

Congratulations! Great work. :sparkles:

Here are some comments:

  • No need for the <p> inside <address>.
  • You don’t need the sender-column on the <time> element when you already have a <div> around <address> and <time> with the same class.
  • At the semester dates the <time> tags should be around the date.
  • The motto on the last line should be wrapped in a <q> element.
  • Everything else looks fine. :+1:

By the way, if you plan on doing more tasks it would be helpful if you could share your code in an online editor like https://codepen.io/, https://glitch.com or https://jsfiddle.net/. It’s much easier for us if we can see the result and test things out if necessary. Thank you :blush:

I hope that helps. Feel free to ask questions.

Have a nice day,
Michael

PS: Your email address is visible in your post. It ended up in the optional “name” field of your profile. I recommend removing it.