"Marking up a letter" assessment

Hello,

Here is my version of the exercise. Thank you in advance.

<!DOCTYPE html>
<html lang="en-US">
  <head>
    <meta charset="utf-8">
    <title>Re: Eileen Dover universiy application</title>
    <meta name="author" content="Dr. Eleanor Gaye">
    <style>
      body {
        max-width: 800px;
        margin: 0 auto;
      }

      .sender-column {
        text-align: right;
      }

      h1 {
        font-size: 1.5em;
      }

      h2 {
        font-size: 1.3em;
      }

      p, ul, ol, dl, address {
        font-size: 1.1em;
      }

      p, li, dd, dt, address {
        line-height: 1.5;
      }
    </style>
  </head>
  <body>
    <main>
      <!-- The letter -->
      <article>
        <!-- Introductory content -->
        <header>
          <!-- Sender's contact details -->
          <address class="sender-column">
            <p><strong>Dr. Eleanor Gaye</strong><br>
            Awesome Science faculty<br>
            University of Awesome<br>
            Bobtown, CA 99999,<br>
            USA<br>
            <strong>Tel:</strong> <a href="tel:+1-123-456-7890">
            123-456-7890</a><br>
            <strong>Email:</strong> <a href="mailto:no_reply@example.com">
            no_reply@example.com</a></p>
          </address>

          <!-- Date of the letter -->
          <p class="sender-column"><time datetime="2016-01-20">20 January
          2016</time></p>

          <!-- Receiver's contact details -->
          <address>
            <p><strong>Miss Eileen Dover</strong><br>
            4321 Cliff Top Edge<br>
            Dover, CT9 XXX<br>
            UK </p>
          </address>

          <!-- Title and opening lines -->
          <h1>Re: Eileen Dover university application</h1>
          <p>Dear Eileen,</p>
          <p>Thank you for your recent application to join us at the University
          of Awesome's science faculty to study as part of your
          <abbr title="Philosophiæ doctor">PhD</abbr> next year. I will
          answer your questions one by one, in the following sections.</p>
        </header>


        <!-- "Starting dates" section -->
        <section>
          <h2>Starting dates</h2>
          <p>We are happy to accommodate you starting your study with us at any
          time, however it would suit us better if you could start at the
          beginning of a semester; the start dates for each one are as
          follows:</p>
          <ul>
            <li>First semester: <time datetime="2016-09-09">9 September
            2016</time></li>
            <li>Second semester: <time datetime="2017-01-15">15 January
            2017</time></li>
            <li>Third semester: <time datetime="2017-05-02">2 May
            2017</time></li>
          </ul>
          <p>Please let me know if this is ok, and if so which start date you
          would prefer.</p>
          <p>You can find more information <a href="http://example.com"
          title="Table of important university dates">about important
          university dates on our website</a>.</p>
        </section>

        <!-- "Subjects of study" section -->
        <section>
          <h2>Subjects of study</h2>
          <p>At the Awesome Science Faculty, we have a pretty open-minded
          research facility — as long as the subjects fall somewhere in the
          realm of science and technology. You seem like an intelligent,
          dedicated researcher, and just the kind of person we'd like to have on
          our team. Saying that, of the ideas you submitted we were most
          intrigued by are as follows, in order of priority:</p>
          <ol>
            <li>Turning H<sub>2</sub>O into wine, and the health benefits of
            Resveratrol (C<sub>14</sub>H<sub>12</sub>O<sub>3</sub>.)</li>
            <li>Measuring the effect on performance of funk bassplayers at
            temperatures exceeding 30°C (86°F), when the audience size
            exponentially increases (effect of 3 × 10<sup>3</sup> increasing to
            3 × 10<sup>4</sup>.)</li>
            <li><abbr title="Hypertext Markup Language">HTML</abbr> and
            <abbr title="Cascading Style Sheets">CSS</abbr> constructs for
            representing musical scores.</li>
          </ol>
          <p>So please can you provide more information on each of these
          subjects, including how long you'd expect the research to take,
          required staff and other resources, and anything else you think we'd
          need to know? Thanks.</p>
        </section>

        <!-- "Exotic dance moves" section -->
        <section>
          <h2>Exotic dance moves</h2>
          <p>Yes, you are right! As part of my post-doctorate work, I
          <em>did</em> study exotic tribal dances. To answer your question, my
          favourite dances are as follows, with definitions:</p>
          <dl>
            <dt>Polynesian chicken dance</dt>
            <dd>A little known but <em>very</em> influential dance dating back
            as far as 300 <abbr title="Before Christ">BC</abbr>, a whole village
            would dance around in a circle like chickens, to encourage their
            livestock to be "fruitful".</dd>
            <dt>Arctic robot dance</dt>
            <dd>Before the Icelanders developed fire as a means of getting warm,
            they used to practice this dance, which involved huddling close
            together in a circle on the floor, and shuffling their bodies around
            in imperceptibly tiny, very rapid movements. One of my fellow
            students used to say that he thought this dance inspired modern
            styles such as Twerking.</dd>
            <dt>Arctic robot dance</dt>
            <dd>An interesting example of historic misinformation, English
            explorers in the 1960s believed to have discovered a new dance style
            charaterized by "robotic", stilted movements, being practiced by
            inhabitants of Northern Alaska and Canada. Later on however it was
            discovered that they were just moving like this because they were
            really cold.</dd>
          </dl>
          <p>For more of my research, see my <a href="http://example.com"
          title="Dr. Gaye's exotic dance research">exotic dance research
          page</a>.</p>
        </section>

        <!-- Ending lines (author name and university motto) -->
        <footer>
          <p>Yours sincerely,</p>
          <p>Dr Eleanor Gaye</p>
          <p>University of Awesome motto: <q>Be excellent to each other.</q> --
          <cite>The memoirs of Bill S Preston,
          <abbr title="Esquire">Esq</abbr></cite></p>
        </footer>
      </article>
    </main>
  </body>
</html>

Note: I use several <address> elements for contact details because according the HTML 5.2 specification:

The address element represents contact information for a person, people or organization. It should include physical and/or digital location/contact information and a means of identifying a person(s) or organization the information pertains to.

which is different from the old specification:

The address element represents the contact information for its nearest article or body element ancestor. If that is the body element, then the contact information applies to the document as a whole.

The address element must not be used to represent arbitrary addresses (e.g., postal addresses), unless those addresses are in fact the relevant contact information. (The p element is the appropriate element for marking up postal addresses in general.)

@Soheil This one also looks really great — well done! The use of semantic containers like <section> and <footer> is not strictly necessary IMO, as they are not needed for any layout purposes and the letter is quite a small, contained unit … but this is really just a stylistic choice on your part and I would not regard it as wrong.

And I am pleased you’ve used the <address> elements — I actually didn’t know this had changed in the new spec. I am pleased that it has, because the definition of <address> was always so confusing.

So my next job is to update this assessment to include <address>, and change all the MDN docs, as they are curently wrong :wink:

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Hello @chrisdavidmills,

Thanks for your reply. I also felt that I used a lot of unnecessary semantic HTML elements when I finished the exercise. I wanted your opinion. I will update my local version and remove the <header>, <footer>, <main> (maybe not necessary since the page just contains the content of the letter) and <section> elements, and just keep the <article> element to mark all the content of the letter as a self-contained composition. Thanks for your time, it was helpful.

@Soheil I don’t think you need to do that. I think that they were used correctly, but it was just a bit overkill for the size of document.

But the design is arguably more extensible/flexible — if you suddenly had to use the same structure to mark up a much bigger letter, or had to implement a complex design or behaviour using CSS/JavaScript, then it might be useful to have those elements present.

All right, I see. Thanks.

Hello!
Please, check my result. Thanks a lot)

<!DOCTYPE html>
<html lang="en">
<head>
    <meta charset="UTF-8">
    <meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1.0">
    <meta http-equiv="X-UA-Compatible" content="ie=edge">
    <title>Re: Eileen Dover university application</title>
    <meta name="author" content="Dr Eleanor Gaye">
    <link rel="stylesheet" href="styles/style.css">
</head>
<body>
    <p class="sender-column">
        <strong>Dr. Eleanor Gaye</strong><br>
        Awesome Science faculty <br>
        University of Awesome <br>
        Bobtown, CA 99999, <br>
        USA <br>
        <strong>Tel:</strong> 123-456-7890 <br>
        <strong>Email:</strong> no_reply@example.com <br>
        <br>
        <time datetime="2016-01-20">20 January 2016</time>
    </p>
    <P>
        <strong>Miss Eileen Dover</strong><br>
        4321 Cliff Top Edge<br>
        Dover, CT9 XXX<br>
        UK
    </P>
    <h1>Re: Eileen Dover university application</h1>
    <p>Dear Eileen,</p>
    <p>Thank you for your recent application to join us at the University of Awesome's science faculty to study as part of your <abbr title="Doctor of Philosophy">PhD</abbr> next year. I will answer your questions one by one, in the following sections.</p>
    <h2>Starting dates</h2>
    <p>We are <strong>happy</strong> to accommodate you starting your study with us at any time, however it would suit us better if you could start at the beginning of a semester; the start dates for each one are as follows:</p>
    <ul>
        <li>First semester: <time datetime="2016-09-09">9 September 2016</time></li>
        <li>Second semester: <time datetime="2017-01-15">15 January 2017</time></li>
        <li>Third semester: <time datetime="2017-05-02">2 May 2017</time></li>
    </ul>
    <p>Please let me know if this is ok, and if so which start date you would prefer.</p>
    <p>You can find more information about <a href="http://example.com">important university dates</a> on our website.</p>
    <h2>Subjects of study</h2>
    <p>At the Awesome Science Faculty, we have a pretty open-minded research facility — as long as the subjects fall somewhere in the realm of science and technology. You seem like an intelligent, dedicated researcher, and just the kind of person we'd like to have on our team. Saying that, of the ideas you submitted we were most intrigued by are as follows, in order of priority:</p>
    <ol>
        <li>Turning H<sub>2</sub>O into wine, and the health benefits of Resveratrol (C<sub>14</sub>H<sub>12</sub>O<sub>3</sub>.)</li>
        <li>Measuring the effect on performance of funk bassplayers at temperatures exceeding 30&deg;C (86&deg;F), when the audience size exponentially increases (effect of 3 &times; 10<sup>3</sup> &gt; 3 × 10<sup>4</sup>.)</li>
        <li><abbr title="HyperText Markup Language">HTML</abbr> and <abbr title="Cascading Style Sheets">CSS</abbr> constructs for representing musical scores.</li>
    </ol>
    <p>So please can you provide more information on each of these subjects, including how long you'd expect the research to take, required staff and other resources, and anything else you think we'd need to know? Thanks.</p>
    <h2>Exotic dance moves</h2>
    <p>Yes, you are <strong>right</strong>! As part of my post-doctorate work, I <em>did</em> study exotic tribal dances. To answer your question, my favourite dances are as follows, with definitions:</p>
    <dt>Polynesian chicken dance</dt>
    <dd>A little known but very influential dance dating back as far as 300<abbr title="Before Christ">BC</abbr>, a whole village would dance around in a circle like chickens, to encourage their livestock to be "fruitful".</dd>
    <dt>Icelandic brownian shuffle</dt>
    <dd>Before the Icelanders developed fire as a means of getting warm, they used to practice this dance, which involved huddling close together in a circle on the floor, and shuffling their bodies around in imperceptibly tiny, very rapid movements. One of my fellow students used to say that he thought this dance inspired modern styles such as Twerking.</dd>
    <dt>Arctic robot dance</dt>
    <dd>An interesting example of historic misinformation, English explorers in the 1960s believed to have discovered a new dance style characterized by "robotic", stilted movements, being practiced by inhabitants of Northern Alaska and Canada. Later on however it was discovered that they were just moving like this because they were really cold.</dd>
    <p>For more of my research, see my exotic dance <a href="http://example.com">research page.</a></p>
    <p>Yours sincerely,</p>
    <p>Dr Eleanor Gaye</p>
    <p>University of Awesome motto: <q>Be awesome to each other.</q><cite>-- Bill S Preston, Esq</cite></p>

</body>
</html>

Hi, I appreciate your time @chrisdavidmills . Can you please review my code and provide any suggestions?

Github: https://github.com/Pawper/Marking-Up-A-Letter-MDN/blob/master/index.html
Live version: https://phillip-marking-up-a-letter-mdn.hashbase.io/

Hi @celtoman!

Looking through this, it is pretty good; I only noticed a couple of small bits:

  • You shouldn’t use two <br> elements to create a space between paragraphs, like you did here:
   <strong>Email:</strong> no_reply@example.com <br>

        <br>

        <time datetime="2016-01-20">20 January 2016</time>

Instead, close the paragraph element after the email address, and put the <time> element inside a separate paragraph

  • The next paragraph element after this was in upper case - <P> these days we write HTML elements in lower case.

Hello again @Pawper! I had a look at your code, and it looks pretty much perfect to me. Great work!

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Hello, please check the text, criticize (if there are errors). There may be errors in the English language as I only teach it and mostly translate through a translator.

<!DOCTYPE html>
<html lang="en-US">
<head>
  <meta charset="utf-8">
  <meta name="author" content="Pavel Danilets">
  <title>Researche's answer</title>
  <link rel="stylesheet" href="css/style.css">
</head>
<body>
  <p class="sender-column"><strong>Dr. Eleanor Gaye</strong><br>

  Awesome Science faculty<br>
  University of Awesome<br>
  Bobtown, CA 99999,<br>
  USA<br>

  <strong>Tel</strong>: 123-456-7890<br>
  <strong>Email</strong>: no_reply@example.com<br></p>

  <p class="sender-column"><time datetime="2016-01-20">20 January 2016</time></p>
  

  <p><strong>Miss Eileen Dover</strong><br>
  4321 Cliff Top Edge<br>
  Dover, CT9 XXX<br>
  UK</p>


  <h1>Re: Eileen Dover university application</h1>

  <p>Dear Eileen,</p>

  <p>Thank you for your recent application to join us at the University of Awesome's science  faculty to study as part of your <abbr title="Doctor of Philosophy">PhD</abbr> next year. I will answer your questions one by one, in the following sections.</p>

  <h2>Starting dates</h2>

  <p>We are happy to accommodate you starting your study with us at any time, however it would suit us better if you could start at the beginning of a semester; the start <strong>dates</strong> for each one are as follows:</p>
  <ul>
    <li>First semester: <time datetime="2016-09-09">9 September 2016</time></li>
    <li>Second semester: <time datetime="2017-01-15">15 January 2017</time></li>
    <li>Third semester: <time datetime="2017-05-02">2 May 2017</time></li>
  </ul>

  <p>Please let me know if this is ok, and if so which start date you would prefer.</p>

  <p>You can find more information about <a href="http://example.com">important university dates</a> on our website.</p>


  <h2>Subjects of study</h2>

  <p>At the Awesome Science Faculty, we have a pretty open-minded research facility — as long as the subjects fall somewhere in the realm of science and technology. You seem like an intelligent, dedicated researcher, and just the kind of person we'd like to have on our team. Saying that, of the ideas you submitted we were most <strong>intrigued</strong> by are as follows, in order of priority:</p>
  <ol>
    <li>Turning H<sub>2</sub>O into wine, and the health benefits of Resveratrol (C<sub>14</sub>H<sub>12</sub>O<sub>3</sub>.)</li>
    <li>Measuring the effect on performance of funk bassplayers at temperatures exceeding 30&deg;C (86&deg;F), when the audience size exponentially increases (effect of 3 &times; 10<sup>3</sup> increasing to 3 &times; 10<sup>4</sup>.)</li>
    <li><abbr title="HyperText Markup Language">HTML</abbr> and <abbr title="Cascading Style Sheets">CSS</abbr> constructs for representing musical scores.</li>
  </ol>

  <p>So please can you provide more information on each of these subjects, including how long you'd expect the research to take, required staff and other resources, and anything else you think we'd need to know? Thanks.</p>


  <h2>Exotic dance moves</h2>

  <p>Yes, you are right! As part of my <strong>post-doctorate work</strong>, I <em>did</em> study exotic tribal dances. To answer your question, my favourite dances are as follows, with definitions:</p>
  <dl>
    <dt>
      Polynesian chicken dance
    </dt>
    <dd>
      A little known but <em>very</em> influential dance dating back as far as 300<abbr title="to Before Christ">BC</abbr>, a whole village would dance around in a circle like chickens, to encourage their livestock to be "fruitful".
    </dd>
    <dt>
      Icelandic brownian shuffle
    </dt>
    <dd>
      Before the Icelanders developed fire as a means of getting warm, they used to practice this dance, which involved huddling close together in a circle on the floor, and shuffling their bodies around in imperceptibly tiny, very rapid movements. One of my fellow students used to say that he thought this dance inspired modern styles such as Twerking.
    </dd>
    <dt>
      Arctic robot dance
    </dt>
    <dd>
      An interesting example of historic misinformation, English explorers in the 1960s believed to have discovered a new dance style characterized by "robotic", stilted movements, being practiced by inhabitants of Northern Alaska and Canada. Later on however it was discovered that they were just moving like this because they were really cold.
    </dd>
  </dl>

  <p>For more of my research, see my <a href="http://example.com.">exotic dance research page.</a></p>

  <p>Yours sincerely,</p>
  <p>Dr Eleanor Gaye</p>

  <p>University of Awesome motto: <q>Be awesome to each other.</q> -- <em>Bill S Preston, <abbr title="Esquire">Esq</abbr></em></p>
</body>
</html>

Hello @Problemon, welcome to the MDN learning area, and thank you for submitting your code!

I have looked at the HTML, and must say that it is really good! I can’t really see anything wrong with it. Well done on some great work.

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Kindly review this code also…

University Letter
<body>
    
    <div class="sender-column"> <strong>Dr. Eleanor Gaye</strong>
        <address class="sender-column"> Science faculty<br>
        University of Awesome<br>
        Bobtown, CA 99999,<br>
        USA </address> 
        <strong class="sender-column">Tel: 123-456-7890<br>
        Email: no_reply@example.com </strong><br>
        <hr><br>

    
        20 January 2016</div>
    <hr>

    <div> <strong>Miss Eileen Dover</strong>
        <address> Cliff Top Edge<br>
        Dover, CT9 XXX<br>
        UK </address> </div><br>


    <h1>Re: Eileen Dover university application</h1>

    <p>Dear Eileen,</p>

    <p>Thank you for your recent application to join us at the University of Awesome's science faculty to study as part of your <abbr title="Post Doctorate">PhD</abbr> next year. I will answer your questions one by one, in the following sections.</p>

    <h2>Starting dates</h2>

    <p>We are happy to accommodate you starting your study with us at any time, however it would suit us better if you could start at the beginning of a semester; the start dates for each one are as follows:</p>

    <ul>
        <li>First semester: 9 September 2016</li>
        <li> Second semester: 15 January 2017</li>
        <li> Third semester: 2 May 2017</li>
    </ul>

    <p>Please let me know if this is ok, and if so which start date you would prefer.
        <br>
        <br>
    You can find more information about <a href="https://asterik-home1.netlify.com" rel="noopener" target="_blank">important university dates</a> on our website.</p>


    <h2>Subjects of study</h2>

    <p>At the Awesome Science Faculty, we have a pretty open-minded research facility — as long as the subjects fall somewhere in the realm of science and technology. You seem like an intelligent, dedicated researcher, and just the kind of person we'd like to have on our team. Saying that, of the ideas you submitted we were most intrigued by are as follows, in order of priority:</p>

    <ol>
       <li> Turning H<sub>2</sub>O into wine, and the health benefits of Resveratrol (C<sub>14</sub>H<sub>12</sub>O<sub>3</sub>.)</li>
       <li> Measuring the effect on performance of funk bassplayers at temperatures exceeding 30°C (86°F), when the audience size exponentially increases (effect of 3 × 10<sup>3</sup> increasing to 3 × 10<sup>4</sup>.)</li>
       <li><abbr title="Hyper Text markup Language">HTML</abbr> and <abbr title="Cascading Style Sheet">CSS</abbr> constructs for representing musical scores.</li>
    </ol>

    <p>So please can you provide more information on each of these subjects, including how long you'd expect the research to take, required staff and other resources, and anything else you think we'd need to know? Thanks.</p>


    <h3>Exotic dance moves</h3>

    <p>Yes, you are right! As part of my post-doctorate work, I did study exotic tribal dances. To answer your question, my favourite dances are as follows, with definitions:</p>

    <dl>
        <dt> chicken dance</dt>
            <dd> little known but very influential dance dating back as far as 300<abbr title="Before Christ">BC</abbr>, a whole village would dance around in a circle like chickens, to encourage their livestock to be "fruitful".</dd>
        <dt>Icelandic brownian shuffle</dt>
            <dd> the Icelanders developed fire as a means of getting warm, they used to practice this dance, which involved huddling close together in a circle on the floor, and shuffling their bodies around in imperceptibly tiny, very rapid movements. One of my fellow students used to say that he thought this dance inspired modern styles such as Twerking.</dd>
        <dt>Arctic robot dance</dt>
            <dd> An interesting example of historic misinformation, English explorers in the 1960s believed to have discovered a new dance style characterized by "robotic", stilted movements, being practiced by inhabitants of Northern Alaska and Canada. Later on however it was discovered that they were just moving like this because they were really cold.</dd>
    </dl>

    <p>For more of my research, see my <a href="https://asterik-home1.netlify.com" rel="noopener" target="_blank">exotic dance research page</a></p>.

    <p>Yours sincerely,<br>
    Dr Eleanor Gaye</p>

    <p>University of Awesome motto: <strong><em>"Be awesome to each other."</em></strong> -- The memoirs of Bill S Preston, Esq</p>
</body>

Hi there @hellreet46, and thanks for sending in your code.

Most of it is looking OK, although there are a few strange things going on in the top bit with the addresses. The spacing is a bit off. Our final code looks like this:

<address class="sender-column">
      <strong>Dr. Eleanor Gaye</strong><br>
      Awesome Science faculty<br>
      University of Awesome<br>
      Bobtown, CA 99999,<br>
      USA<br>
      <strong>Tel</strong>: 123-456-7890<br>
      <strong>Email</strong>: no_reply@example.com
    </address>

    <p class="sender-column"><time datetime="2016-01-20">20 January 2016</time></p>

    <address>
      <strong>Miss Eileen Dover</strong><br>
      4321 Cliff Top Edge<br>
      Dover, CT9 XXX<br>
      UK
    </address>

So we’d used an <address> element to wrap the addresses, as this is the best semantic element for the job. And we’ve put the date of the latter inside a separate <p>. In your version there seems to be too many <br>s, and I don’t know why you’ve got <hr>s there — are they supposed to be <br>s too?

You are missing <time> elements on all the dates.

There are a couple more <br> elements further down the letter — never use these to separate paragraphs of text. Always properly wrap them in <p> elements.

Last thing — the quote is missing the necessary elements to mark it up as a quote, and specify the text that is being cited. Ours look like this:

 <p>University of Awesome motto: <q>Be excellent to each other.</q> -- <cite>The memoirs of Bill S Preston, <abbr title="Esquire">Esq</abbr></cite></p>

So overall, not too bad at all, but I’d suggest you have a go at filling in the missing bits.

All the best.

Hi everyone! Here is what I’ve done:

<!DOCTYPE html>
<html lang="en-US">
<head>
 <meta charset="utf-8">
 <meta name="author" content="Eleanor Gaye">
 <title>Letter</title>
 <link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="style.css">
 </head>
<body>

<p class="sender-column">
    <strong>Dr. Eleanor Gaye</strong></strong><br>
    Awesome Science faculty<br>
    University of Awesome<br>
    Bobtown, CA 99999,<br>
    USA<br>
    <strong>Tel</strong>: 123-456-7890<br>
    <strong>Email</strong>: no_reply@example.com<br>
</p>  

<p class="sender-column">
    <time datetime="2016.01.20">20 January 2016</time>      
</p>

<p>
    <strong>Miss Eileen Dover</strong><br>
    4321 Cliff Top Edge <br>
    Dover, CT9 XXX <br>
    UK <br>
</p>

<h1>Re: Eileen Dover university application</h1>
<br>
<p>Dear Eileen,</p>
<br>
<p>Thank you for your recent application to join us at the University of Awesome's science faculty to study as part
   of your <abbr title="Philosophy Doctor">PhD</abbr> next year. I will answer your questions one by one, in the following sections.</p>
<br>
<h2>Starting dates</h2>
<br>
<p>
    We are happy to accommodate you starting your study with us at any time, however it would suit us better if you
    could start at the beginning of a semester; the start dates for each one are as follows:
</p>   

<ul>
    <li>First semester: <time datetime="2016.09.09">9 September 2016</time></li>
    <li>Second semester: <time datetime="2016.01.15">15 January 2017</time></li>
    <li>Third semester: <time datetime="2017.05.02">2 May 2017</time></li>
</ul>

<p>
        Please let me know if this is ok, and if so which start date you would prefer.
</p>

<p>
    You can find more information about <a href="http://example.com">important university dates</a> on our website.
</p>

<h2>Subjects of study</h2>

<p>
        At the Awesome Science Faculty, we have a pretty open-minded research facility — as long as the subjects fall 
        somewhere in the realm of science and technology. You seem like an intelligent, dedicated researcher, and just
        the kind of person we'd like to have on our team. Saying that, of the ideas you submitted we were most intrigued 
        by are as follows, in order of priority:
</p>

<ol>
    <li>Turning H<sub>2</sub>O into wine, and the health benefits of Resveratrol (C<sub>14</sub>H<sub>12</sub>O<sub>3</sub>)</li>
    <li>Measuring the effect on performance of funk bassplayers at temperatures exceeding
        30°C (86°F), when the audience size exponentially increases 
        (effect of 3 &times; 10<sup>3</sup> &gt;  3 &times; 10<sup>4</sup>.)
    </li>
    <li>
        <abbr title="HyperText Markup Language">HTML</abbr> and 
        <abbr title="Cascading Style Sheet">CSS</abbr> constructs for representing musical scores.
    </li>
</ol>

<p>So please can you provide more information on each of these subjects, including how long you'd expect the 
    research to take, required staff and other resources, and anything else you think we'd need to know? Thanks.
</p>

<h2>Exotic dance moves</h2>

<p>Yes, you are right! As part of my post-doctorate work, I <em>did</em> study exotic tribal dances. To answer your question, 
    my favourite dances are as follows, with definitions:
</p>

<dl>
    <dt>Polynesian chicken dance</dt>
        <dd>A little known but <em>very</em> influential dance dating back as far as 300<abbr title="Before Crist">BC</abbr>, a whole village would dance around 
            in a circle like chickens, to encourage their livestock to be "fruitful".</dd>
    <dt>Icelandic brownian shuffle</dt>
        <dd>Before the Icelanders developed fire as a means of getting warm, they used to practice this dance, which involved huddling close together in 
            a circle on the floor, and shuffling their bodies around in imperceptibly tiny, very rapid movements. One of my fellow students used to say 
            that he thought this dance inspired modern styles such as Twerking.</dd>
    <dt>Arctic robot dance</dt>
        <dd>An interesting example of historic misinformation, English explorers in the 1960s believed to have discovered a new dance style characterized 
            by "robotic", stilted movements, being practiced by inhabitants of Northern Alaska and Canada. Later on however it was discovered that they 
            were just moving like this because they were really cold.
        </dd>
</dl>

<p>
    For more of my research, see my <a href="http://example.com">exotic dance research page.</a>
</p>

<p>Yours sincerely,<br>
    <br>
   Dr. Eleanor Gaye
</p>

<p>University of Awesome motto: <q cite="Bill S Preston, Esq">Be awesome to each other.</q>
<cite>Bill S Preston, <abbr title="Esquire">Esq</abbr></cite></p>

I’m looking forward for a good criticism!!!

Hi there @klepikden! Thanks for submitting your code.

This is not looking too bad at all, but there are a couple of things you could improve.

The first thing I noticed is that you’ve included several unneeded <br> elements. You don’t need <br>s between paragraph elements (i.e. between each set of <p> ... </p>) as paragraphs provide their own spacing by default. and you don’t need a <br> at the end of a paragraph (e.g. just before </p>). You only need <br>s inside a paragraph when you want to break a line.

Next, your datetime attributes are in the wrong format, e.g. <time datetime="2016.09.09">. They need to be in standard ISO format, e.g. 20160909. See https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/HTML/Element/time#Usage_notes for more details.

Just sharing my assessment to check if i am doing right.

</html>
<meta charset="utf-8">
<link href="styles/styles.css" rel="stylesheet">
<meta name="author" content="Edward Londoño Giraldo">
<meta name="description" content="This site is my assessment of the 
principles of HTML programming.">
<address class="sender-column">
    <strong>Eleanor Gaye</strong>
    <pre>
        Science faculty
        University of Awesome
        Bobtown, CA 99999,
        USA
        <strong>Tel</strong>: 123-456-7890
        <strong>Email</strong>: no_reply@example.com
    </pre>
</address>
<p class="sender-column"><time datetime="2016-01-20" class="sender-column">20 January 2016</time></p>
<strong>Miss Eileen Dover</strong>
<address>
    <pre>

Cliff Top Edge
Dover, CT9 XXX
UK


Re: Eileen Dover university application


Dear Eileen,


Thank you for your recent application to join us at the University of Awesome’s science faculty to study as part
of
your PhD next year. I will answer your questions one by one, in the
following sections.

    <h2>Starting dates</h2>

    We are happy to accommodate you starting your study with us at any time, however it would suit us better if you
    could start at the beginning of a semester; <strong>the start dates </strong>for each one are as follows:
    <ul>
        <li>First semester: <time datetime="2016-09-09">9 September 2016</time></li>
        <li>Second semester: <time datetime="2017-01-15">15 January 2017</time></li>
        <li>Third semester: <time datetime="2017-05-02">2 May 2017</time></li>
    </ul>

    Please let me know if this is ok, and if so which start date you would prefer.

    You can find more information about <a href="http://example.com" title="Important university dates."
        target="_blank">important university dates</a> on our website.
</p>

<h2>Subjects of study</h2>
<p>
    At the Awesome Science Faculty, we have a pretty open-minded research facility — as long as <em>the subjects fall
    somewhere in the realm of science and technology</em>. You seem like an intelligent, dedicated researcher, and just
    the
    kind of person we'd like to have on our team. Saying that, of the ideas you submitted we were most intrigued by
    are
    as follows, in order of priority:
    <ol>
        <li>Turning H<sub>2</sub>O into wine, and the health benefits of Resveratrol
            (C<sub>14</sub>H<sub>12</sub>O<sub>3</sub>.)</li>
        <li> Measuring the effect on performance of funk bassplayers at temperatures exceeding 30°C (86°F), when the
            audience
            size exponentially increases (effect of 3 × 10<sup>3</sup> increasing to 3 × 10<sup>4</sup>.)
        </li>
        <li> <abbr title="HyperText Markup Language">HTML</abbr> and <abbr title="Cascade Style Sheet">CSS</abbr>
            constructs for representing musical scores.
        </li>
    </ol>
    So please can you provide more information on each of these subjects, including how long you'd expect the
    research
    to take, required staff and other resources, and anything else you think we'd need to know? Thanks.
</p>
<h2>Exotic dance moves</h2>
<p>
    Yes, you are right! As part of my post-doctorate work, I <em>did</em> study exotic tribal dances. To answer your
    question, my
    favourite dances are as follows, with definitions:
    <dl>
        <dt> Polynesian chicken dance
        </dt>
        <dd> A little known but very influential dance dating back as far as 300<abbr
                title="Before Crist">BC</abbr>, a whole village would dance
            around
            in a
            circle like chickens, to encourage their livestock to be "fruitful".
        </dd>
        <dt> Icelandic brownian shuffle
        </dt>
        <dd> Before the Icelanders developed fire as a means of getting warm, they used to practice this dance,
            which
            involved
            huddling close together in a circle on the floor, and shuffling their bodies around in imperceptibly
            tiny,
            very
            rapid movements. One of my fellow students used to say that he thought this dance inspired modern styles
            such as
            Twerking.
        </dd>
        <dt> Arctic robot dance
        </dt>
        <dd> An interesting example of historic misinformation, English explorers in the 1960s believed to have
            discovered a new
            dance style characterized by "robotic", stilted movements, being practiced by inhabitants of Northern
            Alaska
            and
            Canada. Later on however it was discovered that they were just moving like this because they were really
            cold.
        </dd>
    </dl>
</p>
<p>
For more of my research, see my <a href="http://example.com" title="Exotic dance research page.">exotic
    dance research page</a>.<br><br>

Yours sincerely,<br><br>
Dr Eleanor Gaye<br><br>

University of Awesome motto:<q cite="Moto University">Be awesome to each other.</q> -- The memoirs of Bill S Preston, <abbr title="esquire">Esq</abbr><br>
    
</p>
<script src="scripts/script.js"></script>

Hi @elondonog!

It is hard to check your code as you have pasted it into the message and discourse has run most of the code :wink:

To get it to just show the source code, either link to an online code repository (e.g. if you have a version on GitHub anywhere?) or paste your source code into Discourse, between two sets of three backticks, e.g.

```
your code here

```

Thanks!

Hi Chris,

Thanks for answering, please check the code in github:

And the other assessment about structuring a website is in here:

Thanks for your comments.

Thanks @elondonog!

So first of all, for the letter. This is looking mostly good, but there are a couple of things to improve. I’ve suggest having a look at our finished version for reference.

You shouldn’t really be using <pre> elements for the addresses with broken lines. These are more for code blocks and similar things. You’ll see in the finished code that by default the broser gives these code font. For these it is better to use a <p> element, with a <br> element for each line break that is needed.

In the last paragraph (the one starting “For more of my research…”), I’d probably prefer different <p> elements to be used for separating the different lines.

But that’s about it. Good work here, well done!

@elondonog and now for the page structure assessment — this one looks perfect to me; I can’t see anything wrong with it. Very good work, well done!